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		<title>Comment on T.R. Chowdhury &amp; T.M.Crim by Press Release: Shadow Over Shandahar &#171; Loconeal Publishing</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Press Release: Shadow Over Shandahar &#171; Loconeal Publishing]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 31 May 2012 19:27:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is Hard Work! by Link Roundup: Ladies Edition &#171; Sarah Hans</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/05/21/writing-is-hard-work/#comment-409</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Link Roundup: Ladies Edition &#171; Sarah Hans]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 May 2012 19:19:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Gloria Oliver discusses the aspects of writing authors must understand that can make or break a stor... [...]]]></description>
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		<title>Comment on Using emotions to connect with characters by Ivania</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2011/04/04/using-emotions-to-connect-with-characters/#comment-408</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Ivania]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 May 2012 23:52:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Denise,I tried to visit &amp;  like  your FB page but it kept giving em an error megasse; did you change it?I was trying to reach out to get your opinion on discipline/punishment. I have twin boys (turning two in Feb.) and I am at a loss as to what I  should  be doing. Since you have two boys I&#039; really looking for personal insight &amp; advice. Thanks in advance for your reply! mo(dot)reilley(at)gmail(dot)com All the best!!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Denise,I tried to visit &amp;  like  your FB page but it kept giving em an error megasse; did you change it?I was trying to reach out to get your opinion on discipline/punishment. I have twin boys (turning two in Feb.) and I am at a loss as to what I  should  be doing. Since you have two boys I&#8217; really looking for personal insight &amp; advice. Thanks in advance for your reply! mo(dot)reilley(at)gmail(dot)com All the best!!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is an art by Amelie</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/02/29/writing-is-an-art/#comment-407</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amelie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 May 2012 11:51:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[well i think tht entire soitatiun cud hav bin avoided if u had avoided the ex-gf.tht was like totally an ambush.u wudve enjoyed ur night and the kiss mightve bin more enjoyable,cuz u wudve bin relaxed.and if it still had turned out the same way.yall mightve jus laffed it off.seraly]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>well i think tht entire soitatiun cud hav bin avoided if u had avoided the ex-gf.tht was like totally an ambush.u wudve enjoyed ur night and the kiss mightve bin more enjoyable,cuz u wudve bin relaxed.and if it still had turned out the same way.yall mightve jus laffed it off.seraly</p>
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		<title>Comment on Changing Expectations by Evandro</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/03/27/changing-expectations/#comment-406</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Evandro]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 May 2012 22:30:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Unless you have some serious ctenncoions in the world of people promoting books I guess it&#039;s a dead end. Paper books is a slow and painfully going to grave with all the ebook readers taking over the market. Of course, paper books will be around for quite some time, but it&#039;s faster and cheaper to publish electronically. Unless you&#039;ve got some crazy idea under the rug that you plan to pull I suggest try something else.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Unless you have some serious ctenncoions in the world of people promoting books I guess it&#8217;s a dead end. Paper books is a slow and painfully going to grave with all the ebook readers taking over the market. Of course, paper books will be around for quite some time, but it&#8217;s faster and cheaper to publish electronically. Unless you&#8217;ve got some crazy idea under the rug that you plan to pull I suggest try something else.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is Hard Work! by Gary Wedlund</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/05/21/writing-is-hard-work/#comment-405</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gary Wedlund]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 May 2012 20:09:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[There are so many of these, and you&#039;ve presented some pretty good ones.  Anything I post would certainly only be additions to the fine list. And, of course, there are many, as I&#039;ve said.  So let&#039;s start at the beginning.
An author friend of mine called on night and said, &quot;I want to do this novel that I&#039;m halfway through but I&#039;m kind of stuck on how to make it better.&quot;
I said, &quot;Well, I don&#039;t know anything about your novel, but I suggest you cut the first chapter and give the main character some serious personal baggage that will take him the whole novel to resolve.&quot;
&quot;No, no, that will never work.&quot;
&quot;Sure it will.  Think about it for a second.&quot;
&quot;Oh, come-on. How could you possibly know that would make it better? You don&#039;t even know what I&#039;ve written so far.&quot;
&quot;Shoot, buddy, you&#039;re right. I don&#039;t know anything about your story, but I&#039;m just telling you based on 99% of everything else I&#039;ve ever read.&quot;
&quot;You know,&quot; he said, &quot;come to think on it, you&#039;re right. Shoot. That&#039;s weird. I bet that would work.&quot;

That&#039;s a true story. And, food for thought.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There are so many of these, and you&#8217;ve presented some pretty good ones.  Anything I post would certainly only be additions to the fine list. And, of course, there are many, as I&#8217;ve said.  So let&#8217;s start at the beginning.<br />
An author friend of mine called on night and said, &#8220;I want to do this novel that I&#8217;m halfway through but I&#8217;m kind of stuck on how to make it better.&#8221;<br />
I said, &#8220;Well, I don&#8217;t know anything about your novel, but I suggest you cut the first chapter and give the main character some serious personal baggage that will take him the whole novel to resolve.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;No, no, that will never work.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;Sure it will.  Think about it for a second.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;Oh, come-on. How could you possibly know that would make it better? You don&#8217;t even know what I&#8217;ve written so far.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;Shoot, buddy, you&#8217;re right. I don&#8217;t know anything about your story, but I&#8217;m just telling you based on 99% of everything else I&#8217;ve ever read.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;You know,&#8221; he said, &#8220;come to think on it, you&#8217;re right. Shoot. That&#8217;s weird. I bet that would work.&#8221;</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a true story. And, food for thought.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Thoughts from a first-time slush reader by Lizbeth</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2011/06/20/thoughts-from-a-first-time-slush-reader/#comment-404</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lizbeth]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 May 2012 17:28:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[ummm   I&#039;ve only published a few short steoris  &#039; but they&#039;d have no bar of it. I think I prefaced my short talk with the fact that this was how I&#039;d come to writing, and this was what worked for me. Everyone had to find what worked for them.But I guess that&#039;s what it is. Everyone likes to hear how writers do what they do. It&#039;s partly the whole thing that published writers obviously have  the secret&#039; and we might be able to glean hints at that secret. The truth, however, is rather more mundane.It might feel strange, but bask in it all the same! It&#039;s well deserved attention, despite what you might think]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>ummm   I&#8217;ve only published a few short steoris  &#8216; but they&#8217;d have no bar of it. I think I prefaced my short talk with the fact that this was how I&#8217;d come to writing, and this was what worked for me. Everyone had to find what worked for them.But I guess that&#8217;s what it is. Everyone likes to hear how writers do what they do. It&#8217;s partly the whole thing that published writers obviously have  the secret&#8217; and we might be able to glean hints at that secret. The truth, however, is rather more mundane.It might feel strange, but bask in it all the same! It&#8217;s well deserved attention, despite what you might think</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is Hard Work! by fvanhorne</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/05/21/writing-is-hard-work/#comment-403</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[fvanhorne]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 May 2012 16:23:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;re certainly not full of it! That&#039;s a pretty comprehensive list. Any one of those points could be expanded into a full article, some of them even a book.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re certainly not full of it! That&#8217;s a pretty comprehensive list. Any one of those points could be expanded into a full article, some of them even a book.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing is an art by B Petro</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2012/02/29/writing-is-an-art/#comment-390</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[B Petro]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2012 02:31:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I write, therefore I am?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I write, therefore I am?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Protagonists by Foemn</title>
		<link>http://loconeal.com/2011/10/31/protagonists/#comment-376</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Foemn]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 23:59:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[hi!!!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hi!!!</p>
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